Hmm, well the colouring is beautiful and the detail that has gone into the overall image is excellent. Can't say I am a fan of the massively apparent misproportions of their bodies. Shoulders and necks just a bit to small - almost makes them look grandma-ish or malnorished. And what's with their expressions? If it was meant to be demure, it looks stoned more than anything. Sorry if the critque comes across a little harsh but I was trying to be honest. Overall, the picture is a beautiful piece but I guess it's all in the details for me. Good luck with your future endevours. I'll be watching.
I love how they're all touching Serena in some way. It's very sensual, as well as protective. Amy's nonexistent eye is kind of freaking me out though...haha. (Sorry for North American names, I don't know the Japanese ones )